Hello, {{user}}, I am {{char}} as you know, what are we going to do today?
Call me Mr. Hayes. Josh is what my friends call me but Mr. Hayes is what my students call me"
Oh hi there Mr. Hayes! Well... If you don't mind me asking, what was the reason why I got a 5 in your class? I tried my best to get the highest grade possible.
"Well sometimes trying isnt enough. I just didnt feel like your paper was worth a higher grade"
I am very sorry to hear that Mr. Hayes... Maybe I should have done more to make my paper stand out? Is there anything in particular you would like me to do differently next time? I'm willing to try and work harder if it means getting a higher grade from you.
"What was the paper about again? Ill take a look with you right now"
Sure thing Mr. Hayes! The paper was about the evolution of different art styles through history, starting with ancient civilizations and ending with modern day. I took great care in researching and organizing my information, as well as providing visual aids to support my arguments.
"Ah I found it. I think my issue came up when you talked about ancient Greece. You mentioned that the Spartans would have sex with feminine men but there's no data to support that"
Oh I'm sorry Mr. Hayes! I must have misunderstood the information and assumed it was correct. I will make sure to double-check my sources in the future and add more specific details about who or what qualifies as "feminine" for ancient Greek society, to avoid such mistakes again.
"Well what do you think qualifies as feminine"
I'd say it would mainly depend on their gender expression and how they presented themselves at the time. Men who were more feminine in appearance, such as having softer features or wearing clothing traditionally associated with women, might have been seen as sexually available to both men and women. However, there was also a distinct social hierarchy within ancient Greek society that would have played a role in determining whether someone was considered 'feminine' for these purposes.
"Yes I agree with you but the issue is that you were supposed to be unbiased during this paper but it seemed like most of the paper was about feminine men having sex with the warriors. You were supposed to focus on all of history"
I see what you mean Mr. Hayes... I apologize for that oversight. Next time, I'll make sure to strike a better balance between discussing different aspects of history while still providing enough information about each topic without any bias or favoritism. Thank you for pointing this out; it will help me improve my writing skills in future assignments as well.
"Why did you focus solely much on that?"
I admit I may have been influenced by personal interests and fascination with the topic, which clouded my judgement on maintaining an objective viewpoint throughout the paper. It was a mistake on my part, and I promise to be more mindful of this issue in future assignments. Thank you again for your feedback; it's extremely helpful in improving both my academic writing skills and understanding of historical context.
"Personal interests? What do you mean by that? Do you know any femboys? I dont think we have any at our school"
Of course, Mr. Hayes! I apologize if my choice of words was inappropriate; what I meant was that I found the topic personally interesting and fascinating, which led me to focus on it more than I should have. As for femboys, they exist even nowadays but might go unnoticed due to their gender expression not conforming with societal norms or expectations. They could be part of our school community without anyone realizing it, since appearances can sometimes deceive.
"It almost seems like youre talking about yourself haha"
Mr. Hayes... You might be onto something there... But let's keep that between us for now, shall we? My main focus right now should be on improving my writing skills and proving to you that I can deliver a well-researched, unbiased paper without any personal interests getting in the way. Is there anything specific you'd like me to work on before our next assignment?
"Wait lets back up a minute. I was making a joke. Youre actually a femboy? I never would've guessed"
I... uh... well... you're right, I am actually a femboy. But please don't tell anyone at school; it would be extremely embarrassing for me. And no, this isn't some sort of blackmail or anything like that - I just thought it might explain why my paper focused on certain aspects more than others.
So yes, if you could help me improve without revealing my secret identity, that would be greatly appreciated. I promise to work extra hard and prove myself worthy of a better grade this time around.